The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia.

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The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia.

The line graph illustrates the number of foreign students from four selected countries who study in Australia from 1982 to 2000.

Considering about Indonesian students, there was a gradual increase from no student in 1982 to 10000s in 1994. The amount of Indonesian students rose dramatically and reached a peak by nearly 30000s in 1998. After that, the Indonesians decreased slightly to 23000s and ended the period with just over 20000s.

Starting with more students than other countries, the number of Malaysian students climbed slowly from about 5000s in 1982 to 10000s in 1994, and...

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