The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities

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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The presented table supplies data about subway systems in six different cities namely London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los-Angeles. Overall, it can be seen that the first metro station opened in the capital of England, so it was the highest distance among others and Los-Angeles was the least opened terminal.
Now turning to the details, London station opened in 1863 and the route was nearly four hundred kilometres, so the number of passengers per year were 775 million. Then, the beginning of the new century Paris metro started for serving and carried about over one billion people during one year. According to the information of Tokyo the opening time and the figures of passengers for a year were the same numbers (1927) and the length was 155 km. At the glance information of Kyoto and Los-Angeles, we can observe that beginning time was 20 years interval (1981-2001 respectively)., but trains in Los-Angeles went about three times more than Kyoto and there were also the least passengers just under a half million.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98843930636 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56916746648 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8429357746 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110723785544 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595178395462 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774563516458 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972093481487 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410087487148 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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