The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club s activities facilities and opening hours Summarize the information

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The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarize the information.

The table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the services provided by a city sports club.

We can see from the responses that the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club, with only 5% dissatisfied. In contrast, however, only about two-thirds of female members were positive about activity range and almost a third were dissatisfied.

The genders were more in agreement about club facilities. Only 14% of women and 10% of men were unhappy with these, and majority ( 64 and 63% respectively) were very positive.

Finally, th...

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