The Table below shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.

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The Table below shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.

The table shows the percentage of several brand mobile phones were sold around the world. Those were produced between 2005 and 2006.

Overall, the percentage of sales mobile phone did not show a big change. Firstly, the brand of Nokia gained the highest percentage, 32.5% in 2005, amount others. And then, it improved to 3.5% in 2006 over the world. At the second level, consumer preferred use Motorola than Samsung. It was 17.7 (2005) and got 21.1 (2006).

Sonny Ericson and LG were in the middle of percentages, it were around 63% to 7.4%. Mobile global consumers were less trust to BenQ mobile. This product just obtained 4.9% in 2005 and declined to 2.4 in 2006. Several unknown kinds also contributed a big improvement from 16,2% to 18.20%.

To sum up, the percentage of world mobile phone users could not predicted their passions by using mobile phone. It was able to change increase or decrease in a year.

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