The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts provide the total school spending by insurance, teachers salaries, furniture and equipment, resources and other workers salaries in UK school with three different time. The most permanent feature was teachers salaries and it was contrast with insurance features. For others features were fluctuated in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
UK school spent around 50% for teachers salaries while had down five percent in 2001. Contrary, insurance was a lowest percentage but it was a rise slightly in three different times. It is 2%, 3% and 8%. It is an approximately up fifty percent for all. It is an interesting to know that others. Workers salaries had decrease slightly until 2001, UK school spent 15%. It was different for resources and furniture and equipment. Resources e.g book was a rise 5% in 1981 to 20% in 1991. But, it was decline until 11% in 2001. In others spending, furniture was go up 18% on school spending in 2001.
In a nutshell, UK school had more spent for salaries.
For others features were fluctuated in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Others features were fluctuated in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
while had down five percent in 2001.
while it had five percent down in 2001.
insurance was a lowest percentage
insurance has the lowest percentage
but it was a rise slightly
but it has a rise slightly
It is an interesting to know that
It is interesting to know that
Workers salaries had decrease slightly
Workers salaries had decreased slightly
But, it was decline until
But, it was declined until
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