You are looking for a part time job at a football club.Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter:Introduce yourselfExplain what experience and special skills you haveTell him/her when you think you could start.

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You are looking for a part time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Explain what experience and special skills you have
Tell him/her when you think you could start.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you with regards to part time job opening in your club for the post of assistant manger.I am a 38 years old die-hard fan of football with 10 years of rich experience in managing a mid size football club.

My areas of expertise include managing a football club with multi players for a state level football club. I have a firsthand experience of playing foot ball since my school days. Moreover, I was the captain of my university football team and represented our college in state level tournaments.

I have six years of experience working as a assistant manager at xyz football club for Bradford county specializing in grievience handling and prevention. I have specifically worked on sorting out various issues related to mid size football club having player from different nationality. I have managed to perform well because of my knowledge of seven different languages.

My contract with current club is ending on 30th march 2014 where I am working as a part time assistant manager. I can join your club from 01st April 2014 if you find yourself suitable for the position.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Sincerely,
xyz

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Sentence: I have six years of experience working as a assistant manager at xyz football club for Bradford county specializing in grievience handling and prevention.
Error: grievience Suggestion: grievance

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