It is commonly thought, that invention of vehicle was one of the important issue in our century and it has brought many benefits to our life. However, some people believe having a car is very important measure for reaching to convenience. Although, many people are disagree with this idea like me. As a matter of fact, there are some reasons that will support my opinion in following statement.
Nowadays, everybody might has ambitious of having an individual luxury car according their income that it would carry them to every place safe and sound without waiting for any public transportation. Nobody can not deny the convenient and comfortable life which it has brought for us but if we look to all around wisely we will see that it has had many disadvantages with advent to our planet.
Indeed, it is alternating our environment and ecosystem gradually. Moreover, with a huge amount of fuel and gas it is a big risk for ozone layer and global warming. Meanwhile, the significant factor for human's healthy is having fresh air, so these days this is a one of the substantial problem in many countries that they could not control it's production.
In sum up, I believe the transportation vehicles like cars are destroying to the foundation of healthy life factors. unless, The governments attempt to produce kind of vehicle according solar energy that it not only does not have any disadvantage but also helps people to have more convenient in their society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the foundation of healthy life factors. unless, The governments attempt to produce kin...
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... have more convenient in their society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, kind of, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 248.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91532258065 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78432309994 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7709513623 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.818181818 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102450115621 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411317996046 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579818351239 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598319647528 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198439685967 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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