The average annual expenditure of college students from three countries

Essay topics:

The average annual expenditure of college students from three countries

The table compares the differences in the average annual spending of college students from three different countries.
Overall, in total country A spent the most money in the three countries. Also, in all countries, students spent mostly on accommodation and food.

Turning into the details, the total spending of country A was the highest number compared to country B and C, accounted for $5000. While the average expenditure of country B and C were considerably lower, at $4500 and $1500 respectively.

Accommodation accounted for nearly half of the proportions in country A; 35% in country B and 30% in country C. However, in terms of food and books, the figures were highest in country C, at 36% and 21%. Additionally, students in country B spent 23% of their total expenditure on leisure activities, which was slightly higher than in country A.
Lastly, the expenditure on other purposes accounted for 8% in country A and only 1% in country C.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, lastly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99011464165 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51572327044 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429319007871 0.215688989381 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167494410546 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985485368505 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229979977709 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938464086692 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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