The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organisations

The bar chart provides a comparison of investments made by five different organizations in machinery, building, staff training, and research.

Overall, organization B spends a higher budget than the others, whereas organizations D and E’s spending is the least remarkable. Additionally, the investing pattern of organization C is the most distinct from the remaining ones.

When comparing organizations A and B, it can be effortlessly observed that each of them allocates more than €1 billion for machinery, construction, and research, with the former investing the highest amount of budget expended on building among five organizations, around €1,3 billion, and the latter spending the most on training its workers, roughly €1,9 billion, which makes organization B become a dominant investor in this category. In addition, machinery was the least invested sector, with €1 billion and €0,9 billion, respectively.

When it comes to organizations D and E, the largest investment goes to the building sector, with each devoting 1 billion, while funding for research hits the lowest, at €0,6 billion and 0,7 billion. With regard to organization C, however, the higest fund is for machinery and research, approximately €1,3 billion each, while the figure for building is lower, roughly €1 billion, about €0,2 higher than employees training
 

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while, in addition, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64563106796 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15479084097 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.240684086 43.030603864 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.142857143 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126525063076 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733088832 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563154230183 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095665059405 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533990417944 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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