The bar chart depicts the proportion of Australian males and females in six age groups who exercised on a regular basis in 2010. Overall, it is readily apparent that women exercised regularly more than men, except for those aged 15 to 24.
In detail, in the youngest age group (15 to 24), 52.8% of men did constant exercise while only 47.7% of women did regular exercise. However, for people aged 25 and above, men were less active than women. Started from age category of 25 to 34, only 42.2% of males did regular physical activity, while 48.9% of females constantly exercised. Furthermore, only 39.5% of males did exercise on regular basis, while 52.5% of females did regular physical activity for Australian aged 35 to 44.
Meanwhile, for age category of 45 to 54, the proportion of males who exercised consistently increased to 43.1%. However, this number was still lower if compared to the percentage of females who regularly exercised, at 53.3%. Next, for people aged 55 to 64, only 45.1% of men did constant exercise, while 53% of women consistently did physical activity. Lastly, for Australian aged 65 and over, the proportion of males and females who exercised consistently were almost the same, at 46.7% and 47.1%, respectively.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, still, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98076923077 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69909857843 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524038461538 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.7736690061 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.6 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381964905077 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17386170465 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785812228965 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284739430388 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053583560885 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.