The information about the people in a variety of age groups in Australia who did a continuously physical exercise in 2010 is depicted by the rendered bar chart. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
To begin with, the percentage of 15 to 24 age group men who used to do physical exercise was 52.8 in 2010. However, 47.7% of Australian female were doing regular exercise. Although, this was the only age group with a higher percentage of males than females. In 2010, the percentage of males who were in the 25 to 34 age group was 42.2. Moreover, the figure for females was greater by 6%. There was a drastic gap seen between males and females in the 35 to 44 age group who did a regular physical activity, it accounted for 13%.
Moving towards, in 45 to 54 age group, 43% Australian males were doing exercise regularly. Although, the percentage of females was 53.3, which was highest in any other age groups. There had been a sharp gap shown between males and females in the 55 to 64 age group. it comprised 8%. Nearly 47% of retired males and females did exercise every day.
To cap it all, it can be vividly manifested that women were doing more physical activities than men.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ian female were doing regular exercise. Although, this was the only age group with a hig...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... and females in the 55 to 64 age group. it comprised 8%. Nearly 47% of retired mal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57476635514 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53150728405 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5414563749 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3076923077 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359381915669 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124288583911 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913499904695 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214886416276 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738122086076 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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