The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of unemployment, which categorized by gender, among 20 and 24-year-old graduates in an Europe nation during 2008-2009 period
In general, the unemployment rates among men is constantly greater than that of women. On the other hand, the figure for graduates who out of work of both gender witnessed an oscillation
As demonstrated in the chart, the highest graduate unemployment rates can be recorded at the male chart in October 2009 at approximately 23%, nearly double when compared to that of female (14%) at the same date. It followed by the figures of 16% male bachelors without gainful employment at the same month but a year earlier. It can be said that October of both years marked the most significant gender difference
In terms of the fluctuation of unemploymet rates in the period shown, the April and July 2008 experienced a plateau in proportion of jobless male as well as female bachelors, at around 8% and 6% respectively. Interestingly, this stablization took place again in January and April 2009 but this time only the rates of unoccupied male graduates maintained the same level at 12% as that of female graduates plunged dramatically from 9% to 6%
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
..., among 20 and 24-year-old graduates in an Europe nation during 2008-2009 period ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, well, in general, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07960199005 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0387056189 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601990049751 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8903378466 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.2 112.824112599 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.2 22.9334400587 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 5.23603664747 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151644448092 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809978581726 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539210399446 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972703547283 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565329455051 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.2329268293 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.