The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
The bar chart indicates the percentage of males and females by gender staying alone in England in 2011 and the pie chart compares how many bedroom in one – person households in England in 2011.
In terms of Living alone, men accounted for a higher rate of people staying alone than women in 25- 49 age group and below. In contrast, this rate for females 65-74 age group and above was a higher than males. In the 50 – 64 age range, the proportion of women living alone is as high as that of men with about 50 % in each.
When it comes to the number of bedroom in one persona households, 2 bedrooms in one person households in Enland had the highest rate of using with 35,4%. While 5 or more bedrooms record a least rate with 1,4 %. 1 bedroom consisted of as an roughly equal rate of using in one person households as 3 bedrooms with 28 % and 29,8% respectively. 4 bedroom amounted to 5,3% in a person households in Enland in 2011.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eople staying alone than women in 25- 49 age group and below. In contrast, this r...
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...elow. In contrast, this rate for females 65-74 age group and above was a higher t...
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...roup and above was a higher than males. In the 50 – 64 age range, the proportion ...
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... was a higher than males. In the 50 – 64 age range, the proportion of women livin...
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... 35,4%. While 5 or more bedrooms record a least rate with 1,4 %. 1 bedroom consis...
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...e with 1,4 %. 1 bedroom consisted of as an roughly equal rate of using in one pers...
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Discourse Markers used:
['so', 'while', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.316062176166 0.268076937826 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.0829015544041 0.116061578633 71% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0518134715026 0.0759168565197 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0414507772021 0.0366838410393 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00518134715026 0.0131127313244 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.20207253886 0.155750635184 130% => OK
Participles: 0.0362694300518 0.0379272487307 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41261884802 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0103626943005 0.0210936926555 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0777202072539 0.0948980150116 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0103626943005 0.00967000014798 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 938.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.9 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26966292135 5.90752243213 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275280898876 0.337110787985 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.168539325843 0.247514529752 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0955056179775 0.171178102325 56% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0674157303371 0.112407865282 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41261884802 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533707865169 0.546246751206 98% => OK
Word variations: 45.3040478646 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.25 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5130494672 42.9750493124 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 135.714022679 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.689975730869 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.48048780488 405% => OK
Readability: 39.1039325843 47.7609492067 82% => OK
Elegance: 4.28 2.94281807926 145% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.541746150803 0.418131533498 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.175960595899 0.181151798455 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.079905368306 0.0850326197045 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.668661201935 0.706616315825 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.207225705349 0.157042692854 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255200277686 0.228904883108 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159416480362 0.108899403657 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.317928979597 0.367819155151 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0137296210499 0.0812612215331 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.413531172943 0.316326947829 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827883285 0.0921553760075 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.