The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men women of different ages who were living alone in 2011 The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one person household Summarize the information by reporting the main features Make compa

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men&women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person household. Summarize the information by reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

Given is the mixed charts which include a bar chart illustrating the percentage of English males and females that live alone in 2011 divided by stages of age and a pie chart showing striking differences among number of bedrooms in one-person households in England of the year 2011.

Overally, English women occupied a higher proportion of living alone in 2011 than men did, especially women aged 65 and over. At the same time, it is noticeable that the majority of one-households lived in a 2-bedroom residence.

According to the bar chart, while males aged 16 to 49 made up a higher percentage, females aged 65 and over dominated the proportion. Aside from that, English men and women aged 50-64 met an equality. Close to 53% men at the age of 16 to 24 lived by themselves in 2011 and this percentage climbed up through different stages of ages (62% at the age of 25-34 and 65% at the age of 35-49). From 65 onwards, it was shown that the proportion for women living alone was going up at around 63% in the 65 to 74 year-old group.

Looking at the pie chart, it can be clearly seen that people prefer 2-bedroom houses than any other kinds. The largest proportion was occupied by the 2-bedroom residence (35,4%) followed by the 3-bedroom one (29,8%). The percentage of 4-bedroom one was only one-sixth compared to the 2-bedroom one (5,3%). Five or more bedrooms made up the smallest proportion.

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Average: 8 (16 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69795918367 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66175655129 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7339832954 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.636363636 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383111122439 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145978659404 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970394799887 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260878453865 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952044020072 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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