As we can see from the bar chart, there are two kinds of electricity production and consumption of different countries in figure. Numbers show consumption and production statistics while vertical axis shows countries.
At first, by looking to bar chart we have maximum and minimum production and consumption in electricity relate to China and it advocate the first rank. The last ranking relates to Korea. It is obvious that the second ranking country in both statistics is united state. By looking to chart, it can be found that Russia almost has the same statistics in preparing and availing electricity. Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil are in the 4th,5th,6th,7th,8th and 9th rank respectively. Production is more than consumption by amount of 749,76,233,19,79.5,172.2,119,98.3 and 35.6 for China,US, Russia, Japan, Canada, France, Brazil and Korea respectively. But in Germany consumption is 55.9 billion Kwh less than production.
As it can bee seen all of the countries have electricity production more than electricity consumption except Germany that has consumption more than production. There is a huge electric energy production and usage in two first country. In contrary others have one thousand and below of one thousand in electricity using and producing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'advocates'?
Suggestion: advocates
...n in electricity relate to China and it advocate the first rank. The last ranking relate...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Brazil) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...y. Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil are in the 4th,5th,6th,7th,8th and 9th rank...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , US
...9,79.5,172.2,119,98.3 and 35.6 for China,US, Russia, Japan, Canada, France, Brazil ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... 55.9 billion Kwh less than production. As it can bee seen all of the countries ha...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47715736041 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67657093654 2.65546596893 138% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7964775033 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9166666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207249217408 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749124404385 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595204163535 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160092873437 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045443969668 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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