The bar chart shows the percentage of small medium large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the percentage of small , medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016.

The bar chart displays of firms with social media presence from 2012 to 2016
In general, all three sectors recorded the highest figure in 2016. It can also be seen that the use of social networking sites is more common among large businesses.
Nearly 30% of small businesses used social media for business purposes. This figure rose in the next two years to reach 35% in 2014. Despite falling to 30% in 2015, it surged to reach an all-time high of nearly 50% in 2016. In terms of medium business, the proportion for this sector saw an increase from over 30% in 2012 to nearly 50% in 2014. After declining to 30% in 2015, this number soared to exceed 50% in 2016, staying behind that of large businesses.
It is apparent that large companies have the most significant social media presence with the percentage of firms using these platforms remained consistent at over 75% from 2012 to 2014. After seeing a period of decrease to around 53% in 2015, it skyrocketed to hit a peak of nearly 80% in 2016.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57777777778 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35306472079 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561111111111 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8002000132 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316273792742 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12318449282 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103635420083 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191853915475 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568885988968 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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