The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of world population in four different nations in 1950 and 2002, and predictions of 2050.

It is clear from the chart that China and India have the higher number of people than the USA and Japan. Additionally, while India's population increased during the research period, there was a decrease in the population of the other countries.

In 1950, China Had the highest population, accounted for 23% and India took the second position, which was 15% of world population. Whereas the population of USA and Japan was significantly lower, just around 7% and 3%. The figure continued to rise in India to approximately 17% in 2002, but the number of Chinese, Japanese and American decreased slightly to 20%, 5% and 3%.

In 2050, the population of India tends to go up to nearly 20%. Meanwhile, It is predicted to fall in China's population by 5%.The USA would remain stable and there'd be a slight fall in the number of Japanese in this year.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there'd
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82738095238 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76393090705 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1438196116 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.375 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235296401328 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108257127847 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122687831237 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174904487727 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144789444376 0.0819641961636 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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