Bar chart Task 1

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Bar-chart Task-1

The information of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits of five Australian cities are given in terms of bar-chart. Chart shows the scale of coffee and tea of four weeks.

Firstly, in Sydney and Melbourne the percentage of residents who bought fresh coffee are slightly less than 45%, whereas the percentage of instant coffee buyers are more than 45%. The trend of going out in a cafe for coffee and tea is more in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart as more than 60%.

Secondly, from the bar-chart the consumption of coffee and tea is less in Brisbane and Adelaide as compare to other three cities given. All the cities have increasing percentage of residents in buying of fresh and instant coffee respectively. The percentage of residents going out for coffee is higher than buying coffee in all the cities except in Adelaide, the percentage of this city for going out is less than 50% where the instant coffee buyers are 50%. In Brisbane and Hobart the instant coffee buyers are more than 50%. Only less than 40% residents bought fresh coffee in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

Overall, we can say that residents of Australian cities are more likely to go out for coffee and tea in a cafe than buying coffee and drinking in home.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The information of coffee and tea buying...
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...ale of coffee and tea of four weeks. Firstly, in Sydney and Melbourne the per...
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...lbourne and Hobart as more than 60%. Secondly, from the bar-chart the consump...
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...e in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, we can say that residents of Au...
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...han buying coffee and drinking in home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76279069767 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42519674089 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.395348837209 0.547539520022 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5290437522 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07191517812 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521953462428 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819940339822 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068186493183 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905786319258 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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