chart 1 below shows a normal price of a tablet

Essay topics:

chart 1 below shows a normal price of a tablet

The charts depict average prices, promotional discounts, sales uplifts and advertising budgets for seven stores sailing tablet computers.

Regarding computer costs, Slaker, Jones, Scots and Fraser have an average price within $299-321 each, followed by Lewis and Nova with quite high costs, comprising $460 and $565 accordingly. The only excepting is Smith having the lowest price, at only $180. A similar grouping can be seen in promotional discounts provided. For example, the 4 mid-priced stores offering 10% discount, the two higher-priced shops giving $20 and Smith introducing only 5% sale.

Regarding outlifts in sales throughout promotions, Nova and Lewis again demonstrate the highest rates, hitting roughly 25% and 21% respectively, whereas the figures for Fraser, Scots, Jones and Slaker vary from 12% to 14% each. The rate for Smith is the lowest, making up just over 4%. Turning to television advertising, the most striking point is that Slaker, Jones, Scots and Fraser contribute the largest amount of financial resources to advertising between $63,000 and $70,000, while Lewis and Nova have much lower spends at $18,000 and $21,000. However, Smith does not spend any money at all.

To summary, clear correlations can be noticed between prices, promotional discounts and the amount of money devoted to commercials.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4487804878 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74112488145 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7822326957 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.7 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833194058725 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328985289639 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445619073873 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535916321923 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540140362348 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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