The chart below describes results of a public opinion poll where people were asked to name the most important place smoking should be banned from

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The chart below describes results of a public opinion poll, where people were asked to name the most important place smoking should be banned from.

Submitted by Ebtesam on Sat, 05/02/2015 - 16:35

The pie charts show a survey results about people’s points of view on the places in which smoking have to be prohibited. It can be clearly seen that the highest significant percentage of people are against smoking in workstations whereas the lowest considerable percentage of people reject smoking in bars.

According to the charts, workplaces, restaurants and shopping malls are rated markedly as the first places to deny smoking in, 21%, 19% and 18% respectively. On the other hand, beaches and public transports are considered as the second important places by over tenth percent.

Furthermore, 8 percent of opinions say that but stops have to be on the list of smoking banned places while only 7% have the same idea about teachers’ lounges. Finally, just a small fraction refuses smoking in pubs.

To sum up, the pie charts illustrate the proportion of most essential places should be banned smoking in according to people’s thoughts.

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a survey results
a survey result

smoking have to be prohibited.
smoking has to be prohibited.

by over tenth percent.
by over ten percent.

the pie charts illustrate the proportion of most essential places should be banned smoking in according to people’s thoughts.
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The given pie chart shows the results of the public election for places where smoking should not be allowed.
Majority of the people vote to banned smoking on the work places with significant 21 percent. On second place people decided to put restaurant with 19%. With only 1% less on third place is a shopping mall.
As provided information shows 13% of the society think that no smoking rule should be applied for beaches as well. Slightly different percentage of the people agreed that smoking should be forbidden in public transport areas as well as bus stops. Furthermore, 7% of the population share opinion that smoking should be banned in teachers lounges.
The presented pie chart shows significant decrease in amount of people who thinks that smoking shouldn't be allowed in pubs. As provided data shows only 3% of the population agreed with that statement.
To sum up,this pie chart shows different opinions of the society on where smoking should be prohibited.

The given pie chart shows the results of the public election for places where smoking should not be allowed.
Majority of the people vote to banned smoking on the work places with significant 21 percent. On second place people decided to put restaurant with 19%. With only 1% less on third place is a shopping mall.
As provided information shows 13% of the society think that no smoking rule should be applied for beaches as well. Slightly different percentage of the people agreed that smoking should be forbidden in public transport areas as well as bus stops. Furthermore, 7% of the population share opinion that smoking should be banned in teachers lounges.
The presented pie chart shows significant decrease in amount of people who thinks that smoking shouldn't be allowed in pubs. As provided data shows only 3% of the population agreed with that statement.
To sum up,this pie chart shows different opinions of the society on where smoking should be prohibited.