The given bar chart compares the proportion of women in five different age brackets who had their first child in Australia in three separate years (1966, 1986 and 2006).
Overall, it can be seen that Australian women tended to give birth to their first child later in life. In addition, 30-34 age group became the most popular option for women having the first child, while those over 40 recorded the lowest figures in all three years.
Turning to the chart for details, in 1966, the majority of Australian women gave birth to their first child, with about 63%, which dropped dramatically to roughly 28% in 2006. The percentage of people under 19 also decreased three times during the same time. Despite a little dip in 1986, the proportion of older women having their first child increased more slowly, from 3% in 1966 to about 5% in the final year.
Regarding other groups, starting at second place with about 36% in 1986, the proportion of women who were 25 to 30 giving birth to their child grew considerably to 50% before falling suddenly to 38% in 2006. Meanwhile, those aged 30 to 34 initially rose only to 13% before reaching a peak of 45% in 2006. The figure for the 34-3939 age bracket also climbed enormously from 8% to 30%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... the lowest figures in all three years. Turning to the chart for details, in 196...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65753424658 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27307385368 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598173515982 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1053732624 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436707131935 0.215688989381 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175411441467 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119460717363 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273002516785 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660611774311 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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