The chart shows information about the agr of women in Australia when they have their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
In general, the percentage of women aged under 30 having their first child decreased, while the proportion of women aged over 30 having their first baby increased. In addition, the percentage of women falling into 30- 34 age group giving birth to their first child was highest.
Looking at the chart for more detail, in 1966, the proportion of women who were aged 19-24 having their first child accounted for 62% of the total number of women, compared to 36% those aged 25-30. Over the next 40 years, there was a significant dropped to 28% of women aged 19-24 giving birth to their first child, while those aged 25-30 rose dramatically to 50% before falling to 38% in 2006. Likewise , the percentage of women aged under 19 who gave birth to their first baby decreased considerably from 34% to 12% during the period shown.
Regarding the other informarion, in 1966, the percentage of women aged 30- 34 giving birth to their first baby accounted for 12%, compared to 3% of those aged over 40. During the next 40 years, the 30-34 age group saw a dramatic increase to 45%, which is the highest point in 2006, while those aged over 40 climbed slightly to 5% after decreasing to nearly 2% in 2006. In addtion, the percentage of women aged 34-39 who have their first child increased significantly from 9% to 30%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, look, regarding, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66007905138 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36976807549 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462450592885 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.0685583297 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461311356236 0.215688989381 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.253464365477 0.103423049105 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139681519722 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370552623964 0.15604864568 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15012059886 0.0819641961636 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.