The chart below show information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.

Essay topics:

The chart below show information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.

The given infographic provides with information on the different challenges which individuals have to cope with when they move to other countries.
The bar chart highlights three major issues of changing living place: learning local language, housing and assimilation. 46 per cent of respondents aged between 18 and 34 indicated making new friends in a new country as the most difficult part of changing living place. In contrast, other age groups – individuals between 35 and 54 and over 55 – found making new friends less challenging since 36 and 23 per cent of respondents opted the issue. Individuals in both young (18-34) and middle (35-54) aged groups considered finding housing challenging at 40 per cent. Their senior counterparts marked this issue at 22 per cent. The young people had thought learning local language was not significantly challenging as only 29 per cent of them chose it, while for the senior individuals, it was the main drawback of changing a living place.
The bar chart indicates major challenges of moving to other countries to live there permanently for different age groups.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14364640884 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85930685033 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624309392265 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5316058949 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185660497727 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846836424863 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718051970832 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162760890057 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559568855485 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.