The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The bar chart demonstrates how much leisure time was enjoyed by males and females at different employment status in 1 year from 1998 to 1999.
Overall, men had more hours of free time per week than woman in three of the employment categories. It is clear that in the two remaining categories, only figures for women are shown - employed part time and housewives.
Unemployed and retired people of both genders enjoyed the same highest amount of free time with approximately 85 hours and 75 hours for men and women respectively. In addition, at the employed full time group, over 50 hours are spent for leisure by men weekly, while women spent less hours for free time, at nearly 40.
At the remaining employment groups, housewives female individuals enjoyed 50 hours of free time, slightly higher than those who were employed part time, who had just over 40 leisure hours weekly. There are no figures for men in either of these categories.
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- In a global economy many goods including what we use on a daily basis are transported from other countries in a long distance To what extent do you think its benefits exceed its drawbacks 92
- It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. 78
- Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree? 86
- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisement? What can be done to protect them. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... figures for women are shown - employed part time and housewives. Unemployed and retir...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...pectively. In addition, at the employed full time group, over 50 hours are spent for leis...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...eisure by men weekly, while women spent less hours for free time, at nearly 40. At the ...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...eisure by men weekly, while women spent less hours for free time, at nearly 40. A...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...tly higher than those who were employed part time, who had just over 40 leisure hours wee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88819875776 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58131733955 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596273291925 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5363131022 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348327130649 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16618212343 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695323586052 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225435648507 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508904983665 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.