The chart below shows the average cost of the monthly contract for four different mobiles (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.
The line chart compares four different telecommunications, namely Alpha, Domo, Lex and Sim TX, in terms of the average money of monthly indenture in a particular European nation in the first three quarters of 2002.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that there was an increase in the figures for all companies, except for Sim TX whose price remained fairly unchanged over the period shown. In addition, the monthly cost of Alpha's firm experienced the most remarkable growth.
In January, each person when they use Domo's service had to pay for this corporation the highest charge, exactly 15 euros and three times higher than that of Alpha, followed by Lex telecom carrier with about 12 euros, compared to around 9 euros monthly fee of Sim TX company.
In February, the amount that the Domo's user must pay increased slightly by about 1 euro to around 16 euros, while the Lex's rate decreased to almost 10 euros. However, since February the price of both firms rose strongly add 10 euros to nearly 24 euros for Domo and approximately 19 euros in September. On the other hand, the service charge of the other two telecommunications saw a mild rise. Details, the per-client of Sim TX and Alpha lost add about 2 euros in April. Whereas the price of Sim TX kept rising to approximately 14 euros, the figure for Alpha came back to the original cost in June. Nevertheless, there was a reversal in the last three months. The fee when one person uses Sim TX decreased significantly and almost equal with the initial cost. By contrast, the data for Alpha witnessed a growth like a rocket, at correctly 25 euros in September.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...9 euros monthly fee of Sim TX company. In February, the amount that the Domos use...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, except for, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75971731449 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75414892723 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.275788222 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145957645201 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540782813043 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410425151502 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993265071072 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312787008497 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.