The chart below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart depicts the number of imprisonments in five countries from the period 1930 to 1980.
Overall, there were upward trends in Great Britain, Australia and New Zealand from the time between 1930 and 1960. However, figures represented for three countries hit at the same number in 1970. The United States and Canada were considerably reported with fluctuated trends over the period of time given by.
It is apparently can be seen that by the time of 1980, the USA reached a peak with 138 cases of detention reported. Simultaneously, the second highest number which can be seen from the chart was from the US, with the figure of 135. In contrast, Great Britain was the country had the least number of imprisonments among five countries from 1930 to 1960, and recognized with 35 imprisonments in 1930 had been mentioned from the database. The figures for Canada witnessed second highest numbers of imprisonment over the period from 1960 to 1980 and the year of 1940. Two years that were seen remarkable imprisonments in Canada surpassing The United States were in 1930 and 1950, with 120 and 118 cases had been directly announced. By the time from 1930 to 1950, The number of imprisonments in New Zealand was seen to be declined. However, between 1960 and 1980, it rose steadily from 62 to 83 cases of imprisonments. Australia had the same pattern of New Zealand when the imprisonments decreased from 66 to 40 cases from the time between 1930 and 1950 and skyrocketed from 40 in 1950 to 82 in 1980.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...eported with fluctuated trends over the period of time given by. It is apparently can be seen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, second, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77394636015 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72338609345 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44061302682 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7539680397 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190823800026 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908923521501 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604052770251 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170888837118 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462083919594 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...eported with fluctuated trends over the period of time given by. It is apparently can be seen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, second, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77394636015 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72338609345 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44061302682 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7539680397 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190823800026 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908923521501 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604052770251 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170888837118 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462083919594 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.