The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years

The pay chart illustrates what kind of work anthropology graduates employed. The table represents how much the anthropologist paid in work after five years. It can be easily seen that more than half of the graduates preferred full-time work and The average salaries tended to be much higher for government sector than those working as a freelancer or in private companies. Half of the graduates who chose the government sector earned more than 100 thousand dollars.

By looking into details, 15% of graduates employed in part-time work. However, 12% of them could not find a job. 5% of the graduates had a part-time job and post-grad study at the same time. The graduates who chose full-time post-grad study were equal to graduates with an unknown preference which comprised %8.

According to the data provided in the table, the same trend, 5% and %15 were shown by freelancers and the government employees in two ranges $25,000 - $49,999, and $50,000 - $74,999 respectively. Moreover, freelance consultants were overwhelmingly employed in the upper pay scales at 40% in both $75,000 to $99,999 and $100,000+. However, government workers on those scales at 30% and 40% respectively. Private companies represented 10 percent in the lowest income range, a striking 35 percent earning $50,000 to $74,999, while 25 percent and 30 percent of graduates made $75,000- $99,999 and $100,000+, respectively.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17937219731 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91802740745 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.7708605715 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117324026817 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053868936232 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667356807453 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848715041789 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753392012421 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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