The chart shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of nutrients that may be harmful if consumed excessively, which is contained in four typical meals in the USA
Overall, differences are noticable in the portion of nutrients comprised by each meal. Also, while breakfast is the healthies meal in a day, dinner and snack is in sharp contrast
In terms of added sugar, roughly half of this is found in snacks with 42%, which comprises of only 14% and 21% sodium and saturated fat, respectively. On the other hand, in every dinner, the American intake approximately 43% sodium and 37% saturated fat, while the figure from added sugar is relatively lower with 23%
Meanwhile, the proportions of these nutrients found in breakfast and lunch are considerably small. Breakfast only contains 14% of sodium and the same ratio of 16% of added sugar and saturated fat. Finally, 29% of sodium is consumed in lunch, 10% and 3 % higher than that of added sugar and saturated fat, respectively
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, dinner and snack is in sharp contrast In terms of added sugar, roughly half of...
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Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...this is found in snacks with 42%, which comprises of only 14% and 21% sodium and saturated f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94478527607 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74422762301 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.50223018 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.2 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891644416607 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512934354995 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766049676359 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763237698525 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785334048668 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.