The given bar chart compares the data on the number of minutes that males and females in Great Britain spend on household chores per day .
Overall, it is clearly seen from the chart that men spend most time on gardening/pet care, while women are mostly responsible for cooking/baking/washing up . In addition, most household chores are done by females.
It is clear that the amount of time that men allocate for gardening/pet care/maintenance odd jobs is than that of women . To specify, males use 49.5 minutes for gardening/pet care each day, whereas the figure for females is only 21 minutes. Besides, 26 minutes is the average amount of time that men allocate for maintenance odd jobs per day, which is approximately three times as high as the figure for women.
Nevertheless, the number of minutes spent on other categories by women per day is higher than that of men. In detail, it takes 74 minutes for women to cook/ bake/wash up per day, whereas the figure for men is just only 30 minutes. Moreover, the amount of time which women allocate for laundry as well as cleaning house is over 3 and 4 times higher than that of men, respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...esponsible for cooking/baking/washing up . In addition, most household chores are...
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.... It is clear that the amount of time that men allocate for gardening/pet care...
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...rdening/pet care/maintenance odd jobs is than that of women . To specify, males u...
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...odd jobs per day, which is approximately three times as high as the figure for wo...
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...Moreover, the amount of time which women allocate for laundry as well as cleani...
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...amount of time which women allocate for laundry as well as cleaning house is o...
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... women allocate for laundry as well as cleaning house is over 3 and 4 times hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, nevertheless, well, whereas, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77386934673 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94765296036 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497487437186 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4311235972 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992226488954 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527366746965 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353984568289 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789592689683 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362466509119 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.