The chart shows the employment status of adults in the US in 2003 and 2013

Essay topics:

The chart shows the employment status of adults in the US in 2003 and 2013

The change in seven different employment status in American adults from 2003 to 2013 is displayed in the bar chart, shown in percentage.

Overall, adult population in the US were most likely to be businessmen, but it was surpassed by self-employed in the last period. However, unemployed persons decreased year-to-year as well as medic and men in business, while others showed a reverse.

Initially, the most popular occupation in the US was to work in business, being the maximum data recorded at almost a half, followed by medical practitioners at a fifth. Furthermore, the figure for builders and freelancers accounted for one in ten as similar as that for unemployed people. When it comes to two remaining status, those were below a tenth.

Eventually, the proportion of American working in business declined dramatically to nearly a quarter, and that of unemployment and medics shrank also to be a half of that in the initial year. Simultaneously, building sector gained more popularity, showing twofold incline. Significantly, the rate of self-employed persons broke a record as the highest, recovering threefold virtually. Turning to others, that of the US population occupying in education training and hotel industry grew to share a similar percentage at closely two in ten throughout a decade.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, as to, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3125 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21616648918 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1823257542 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261819279144 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086528520448 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109710834066 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169592267756 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132312274771 0.0819641961636 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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