The chart shows the number of students in the UK universities who completed (on time or late) failed to write and rewrote their dissertation in 1990, 2000, 2010.

Essay topics:

The chart shows the number of students in the UK universities who completed (on time or late) failed to write and rewrote their dissertation in 1990, 2000, 2010.

The bar chart given illustrates the information about how many students studied in Britain universities who finished the thesis the postgraduate over the course of 20 years from 1990 to 2010.

Overall, what stands out from the chart is that a majority of students completed their dissertation on time, whereas there were still some students who failed and had to rewrite it.

In 1990, the number of students handed in their dissertation projects on time for the highest percentage with roughly 50 students. However, there was a similarity in both a handed in the thesis not punctually and rewrote again, approximately 25 students.

After 10 years, some progress was made with an increase in those completed the projects, about 115 students and 50 students ending on time and later, respectively. The corresponding figures for students who failed to write also declined, from under 50 to 40 students in 2000.

Lastly, in 2010, more and more students finished their postgraduate thesis on time, at 170. Meanwhile, the rate of handing in projects later saw remains stable. At this time, students were also more successful and hard-working, with only 30 and 10 failed to write and rewrote the projects.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, lastly, so, still, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14720812183 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83393336812 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2412743215 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393493978728 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14992597042 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851747325674 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204925368524 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040548897038 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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