The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The vertical bar graph elucidates the precise details of accommodation types of families in two regions named England and Wales measured in percentage, over the time period from 1918 to 2011.
Overall, the bar graph highlights the striking patterns among the households over the years, a gradual rise in the count of owned accommodation category with slight fluctuations. However, there was a downward trend with little ebbs and flows was observed for the second category which constitutes rented houses throughout the time period.
For the first twenty years, people who opted to own their houses started with nearly 23% in 1918, and it rose by about 8% by 1939, which then dropped by just 1% in 1953. However, in the following years, the figures soared substantially since 1961, and reached a peak of approximately 70% in 2001 with 5% fall by the end of 2011.
In contrast, the group of people who preferred rented residence accounted for almost three quarters in the beginning of the period, plunged by 10% in 1939 then it remained unaltered for the next 14 years. Although these rates declined considerably until 2001, the proportions grew to 35% by 2010 where the count was halved when compared to 1918.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.039408867 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66826878838 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 20.0550263434 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 146.142857143 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168731403796 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709378548225 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540751237436 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100339543834 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523781981368 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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