The pie chart illustrates the amount of variety of job occupation which are occupied with the graduated from Blue sky university in 2006.
As it is clear approximately half of the students have chosen to deal with industries, moreover most of these students, about two thirds of them, have sown a tendency to service industry (33%) rather than manufacturing industry (16.3%). The next proportion is related to education plus politics and government that have taken place roughly a quarter in this figure (former 14.7%, latter 12.1%).
The next most popular employment sectors respectively are the art, entertainment, media (7.8%), science and technology (7.3%), civil service (5.6%). Sport and Charity together include less than half a percent by 0.1% and 0.3% in order. Totally, it shows half of the graduates from school gravitated toward industries, a quarter of which went to politics and education also the last quarter contain all the other employments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o education plus politics and government that have taken place roughly a quarter ...
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...chnology 7.3%, civil service 5.6%. Sport and Charity together include less than h...
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...rter contain all the other employments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79848965003 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690789473684 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9295745213 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150752201405 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669509714249 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774898377479 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112867978033 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835911475536 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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