the chart shows the proportion of people in the UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports

Essay topics:

the chart shows the proportion of people in the UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports.

The bar chart compares the percentage of respondents expressing their interest in six different kinds of sport in the UK in 1995, 2000, and 2005.

As can be easily seen that soccer was the most popular sport, as opposed to golf, which is the least interesting one. While the number of people who liked football, swimming, and rugby increased slightly over the 10-year period, snooker, tennis, and golf witnessed a downward trend.

Football was the most interesting sport which always constituted the highest level of respondents, at 41% in 1995. The figure increased gradually to 45% in 2005. 20% of surveyed people said that they were interested in swimming in 1995. After experiencing a rise to 39% in 2000, the figure then declined by 2% in 2005. The percentage of people who keen on rugby decreased to 29% in 2000, followed by a significant rise to 37% in 2005.

Compared to 2005, snooker players were less in 1995 but more in the next five years, at 23%. Nearly 30% of players said that they played tennis in the first year surveyed; however, their participation rate dropped to 21% in 2000 and remain stable in the five years later. Golf was known as the least popular sport with only 18% of participants. After falling by 2% in 2000, the figure recovered to 25% in 2005.

Votes
Average: 7.5 (14 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74553571429 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58061587309 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3808858035 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5833333333 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18762784924 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682539037939 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087361598575 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113857875177 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304295294396 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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