The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

Statistical data on the number of overseas tourist arrivals traveling to the UK, and British residents going outside between 1979 and 1999. Additionally, the data also show the five popular countries where people in the UK choose to visit in 1999 are illustrated in the given line graph and bar chart.

As can be observed explicitly from the chart, the figure for people who visit and from the UK witnessed an upward trend over the period of 20 years, starting from 1979. Moreover, France was the most prevalent of five countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

In the year 1979, while over 12 million UK residents pay a visit to foreign countries, international travelers occupied lower at around 10 million after which both had a surging figure in the tourist numbers. In comparison with the number of British visitors, which dramatically increased fivefold compared to the first time and reached a record high of over 50 million in 1999, foreign tourists just stood at more than a half at this time.

Moreover, in 1999, France and Spain both had the highest number of UK visitors with the figure reaching over 11 million and 9 million in turn. Followed by the USA which was recorded twice as low as the figure for Spain. Greece and Turkey were the least popular of all five countries to travel by British people.

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Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79475982533 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50396988437 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572052401747 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4390599182 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268717324696 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123419548502 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798643717457 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181201119255 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957493632307 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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