The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050

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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The pie charts give information about the proportion of Italian and Yemeni inhabitants in three particular age groups in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Overall, most Italian was from 15 to 59 years old, while the proportion of the 0-to-14-year-old group in Yemen was the highest. It is predicted that the number of elderly will increase in both nations.
In 2000, people who were aged from 0 to 14 years old in Yemen accounted for the highest proportion and were roughly 36% more than Italian people. Half of Yemen's population were children, while the figure for citizens living in Italy was the lowest, at under 15%. One-fourth of the total population was 15-59-year-old Italian, compared to that of Yemen, at 50,1% and 14,3% respectively.
In 2025, the number of Italian people over 60 years old will significantly increase and be eight times as many as the population in Yemen. Both the number of children in Yemen and Italy will dramatically decrease. The proportion of 15-to-59-year-old in Yemen will be on the rise, about 57%, with that of Italy will drop dramatically by roughly 50%

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94565217391 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97508558121 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8948570053 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265453029496 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119594969821 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109117128124 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183572469387 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136125732291 0.0819641961636 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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