The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

Essay topics:

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of
nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The diagram illustrates how much the average percentage of meals on a daily basis of three different parts of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar, while all of these types are considered to be unhealthy if consumed too much.

In general, while the figure for dinner is higher than the other parts, the number of snacks is equally important in the daily meal of American.

In terms of the first graph, the amount of sodium in breakfast America citizens are recorded, at 14% in typical meals, while the figure for both Saturated fat and Added sugar is equally important every day, at respective being exactly 16%. However, the proportion of Sodium in Lunch is higher than added sugar, respectively with 29% and 19% during that period, the number of Saturated fat is nearly the statistics of sodium, approximately 26% in the daily meal of dwellers.

With regard to the latter graph, the figure for Sodium in Dinner is twofold compared to the figure for Sugar, respectively 43% and 23%. In addition, the number of Saturated fat consumed in daily routine, at 37% during this period. The figure for Added sugar in snacks accounted for 42% compared to the others, while the proportion both of Sodium and Saturated fat whose figures falls within a range from 14% to 21% in typical meals of inhabitants.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, while, in addition, in general, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85650224215 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53700715742 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488789237668 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.871350911 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.714285714 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123283683804 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667650583663 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106486763206 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106329578626 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125985194535 0.0819641961636 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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