The charts below show the average persentage in typical meals of three types of nustrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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The charts below show the average persentage in typical meals of three types of nustrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

A glance at the pie charts provided reveals the average proportion of nutrients which consist of typical meals eaten by americans.
Overall, it is crystal clear that population consume snacks with more part of sugar while in dinner the sodium and saturated fat take bigger proportion comparing to breakfast, lunch and snacks.
There are striking similarities between the percentage of sodium and saturated fat with 29% of sodium and 26% of saturated fat in consumed meals during lunch, whereas the amount of sugar is lower, stands at 19%. The food eaten in dinner by americans consist of sodium and saturated fat which stands at 43% and 37% respectively. However, the added sugar is at mere 23%.
Another interesting feature is that the amount of sodium in breakfast and snacks are similar with 14% each, likewise the saturated fat which stands at 21% and 16% of snacks and breakfast. Meanwhile , the breakfast includes the sugar at about 16% which is the lowest figure among the other meals.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, likewise, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99397590361 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56080278925 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1149932065 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088103902914 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535348467516 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734873796168 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764830782424 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877831185183 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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