The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960, 2010.
Given are the two pie charts delineating the proportion of employees in three distinct fields, namely manufacturings, sales and services in Town A and Town B in two certain years: 1960 and 2010.
Perceptibly, there was a significant movement in the rate of people who worked in manufacturings and sales to services area in town A during 50 years mentioned. Meanwhile, notwithstanding an obvious plunge, manufacturing was likely to dominate in that rate in town B.
During the course of time, in town A, there was a drastic leap in the percentage of services employees from 29% to 64%, while the reverse was true for both manufacturing and sales when further 21% and 14% diminutions to 20% and 16% were recorded respectively in the last year. Strikingly, the services industry attracted by far the most workers compared to the rest over the shown period.
When it comes to the rate of employees in town B, manufacturing and services experienced the opposite directions with a dramatic slump by 17% of the former from 70% and a surge by 15% of the latter from 10% within 50 years reported. Moreover, sales, with 20% in 1960 standing from the second in terms of the rate of people working in, became the least common sector despite a slight escalation by 2% in the last year recorded.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g was likely to dominate in that rate in town B. During the course of time, in t...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'During'.
Suggestion: During
...y to dominate in that rate in town B. During the course of time, in town A, there was a drastic le...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'services'' or 'service's'?
Suggestion: services'; service's
...vely in the last year. Strikingly, the services industry attracted by far the most work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78828828829 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94724397664 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563063063063 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0098451934 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.857142857 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7142857143 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236267267323 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105663021726 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700860844137 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1459934916 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616036768384 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.