The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of people in various kinds of volunteer activities, namely Environmental, Art, Health Care, Sport, Educational and Others, between 2008 and 2014.

Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that while volunteers' participation in environmental, sport and health care groups increased, the opposite was true for the other kinds of institutions. Additionally, the percentage of health care volunteers were the lowest during the two years.

In 2008, the number of people who chose educational foundations as a place to volunteer was the highest, accounted for 24%, followed by Art and Others at 18% and 15% respectively. Over the four years ensuing, all three forms witnessed a significant decrease. Individuals taking part in educational organisations decreased violently to 17%. Meanwhile, 6% was the reduction of both art and other organizations.

Regarding the remaining three associations, the band of volunteers in environmental unions stood second place with at 21% and three times higher than that of Health Care establishments with the number as 7%, 15% of all volunteers attended to sport organisations in 2004. Four years later, the number of members in Environmental and Sports institutions dramatically grew with increases of 8% and 10% sequentially while the figure for Health Care groups trivially rose to 8%.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5619047619 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32701441886 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2399542645 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.777777778 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139096598159 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568112090825 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649054699188 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971467522335 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596684308791 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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