The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie charts juxtapose information about the proportion of consuming waters in three purposes through six different regions.

As is self-evident, most of the water was use for industrial aim in the continent which located developed countries. Agriculture and domestic had a lower rate.

Examining the data, we can obviously realize that center Asia, Africa, and South Africa had the same trend above 70 percent and used for agriculture and domestic had second state well-over 7 percent. Industry section consumes 5 to 10 percent in picks and troughs. However, Southeast Asia has the Same inclination despite industry and domestic which switch their place and get proportion 12 and 7 percent.

Moreover, Europe and North America had different rate of water consumption. They are usage approximately 50 percent of water in the industrial purpose. Agricultural reason has lower priority in contrast with industry get almost one-third of proportion. However, the percentage of domestic consume had lowest in that areas, approaching 15 and 13 present.

In general, it can be stated in contrast with that the origins which full by developed countries have inclination use water for industry reason, the areas located by developing countries.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, third, well, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57731958763 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90416232056 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4055825425 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3636363636 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136309849913 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529476705158 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588014605264 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942337082993 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581136390504 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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