The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of water utilized by six different regions of the world namely North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia for various purposes.

Overall, the most significant proportion of water is used for agriculture, while the least amount is accounted for domestic use. However, usage for industries varies substantially in the studied areas.

Focusing on agricultural and domestic purposes, these fields report for nearly and above four-fifths of usage in Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia with 84, 88, and 81 percent respectively. Whereas, these numbers for North America and Europe is just around a third with 39 and 32 percent. Regarding domestic use, the least is accounted by Central and South East Asia at 7%, while maximum notes at 19% for South America.

On the other hand, Industrial usages were nearly a half in areas of North America and Europe at 48 and 53% respectively although these numbers are below a tenth in the remaining regions.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fifths of usage in Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia with 84, 88, and 81 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, third, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19161676647 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67568871924 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8641785873 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201958507992 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932240278112 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673358350188 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128494468578 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623272443304 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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