The stipulated bar diagram depicts details regarding reasons of adults decision to study and the pie diagram illustrates proportion in which adults study cost should be divided.
It is clear from the data that, most of the students choose to study based on their interest in the particular subject, almost 40% of grown people coming under this category. A considerable proportion of 38% people elect to study to gain qualification for their future. Whereas, 22% youngstaers continue their study to get a good career growth in their current position. promotion prospects and enjoy learning are the 20% grown up's motivation to start their studies. A very less percentage of experienced people start studies to change their jobs (12%) and to meet people (9%).
In addition, people believe that the cost of these education should be shared wisely among different parties. Individuals themselves should contribute 40% of their course fees followed by employer and tax payer, which is 35% and 25% respectively.
In conclusion, youngsters decision regarding the studies mostly influenced by external factor like subject interest and employment perspective. While grownup motivation is purely based on internal factors like enjoy learning and to meet new people although they constitute a very small percentage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to gain qualification for their future. Whereas, 22% youngstaers continue their study t...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Promotion
...areer growth in their current position. promotion prospects and enjoy learning are the 20...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this education' or 'these educations'?
Suggestion: this education; these educations
...dition, people believe that the cost of these education should be shared wisely among different...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44827586207 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81468366363 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630541871921 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.49606532 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103921983485 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419226050118 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543758022267 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754545709809 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628484163475 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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