the charts show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA, 1970-2000 and Marital status of adults Americans, 1970 and 2000.

Essay topics:

the charts show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA, 1970-2000 and Marital status of adults Americans, 1970 and 2000.

The first bar chart illustrates how many Americans were married and divorced over a 30-year period from 1970 and 2000 while the second bar chart shows figures for the marital status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000.
Overall, it is obvious that there was an upward trend in the number of marriages between 1970 to 2000. Most of adult Americans were married in both years, but the level of single adults was higher in 2000.
Looking at the detail, By 1970 there were 2.5 million married Americans. Having remained stable in 1980, the number of marriages fell slightly, reaching around 2.3 million in 1990, and followed by a marginal decline to 2 million in 2000. In contrast, the level of divorces reached a peak at nearly 1.5 million in 1980, Then the figure can be seen a fall to 1 million in 2000, which was the same as the marriages in the first year.
Approximately 70% of adult Americans were married in 1970, then fell by around one-tenth of that number. Regarding unmarried and divorced status, the proportions rose by nearly 10% in 2000. There was a lower number of windowed Americans in 2000 compared to that in 1970.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, regarding, second, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.665 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40036976318 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1858275208 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479583907895 0.215688989381 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202454084614 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917578825867 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306227159073 0.15604864568 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795621471106 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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