The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph represents the average temperature and rainfall rate in the city of Kolkata from the month of January to December.

Overall, the precipitation rate and the temperature ratio were fluctuated over the period. The maximum precipitation received in the month of July and the minimum precipitation was in December. While,the highest temperature was in May, the lowest was in January.

The precipitation rate fluctuated from January. But,the maximum amount of precipitation received in Kolkata in July accounted for 340mm, which is followed by 325mm in August and 290mm in September. The precipitation rate was near to 10 mm in january and gradually increased to 251mm at the end of June, whereas, after the significant rise from June to July, which dramatically declined from 290mm to 10mm from September to December.

While analysing the temperature ratio,the hottest moth was May with the temperature rate of 32 degree centigrade, followed by 30 in april as well as in June. The minimum temperature was in January and in december of 20 degree centigrade. However, after january, there were a gradual rise in the temperature and reached at the maximum in May, there after, temperature rate declined drastically and came back to the similar point at 20 degree centigrade in december.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, well, whereas, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26794258373 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06788497589 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468899521531 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5360223338 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981854914725 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520563679845 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646826786014 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094005788548 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862593274917 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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