The diagram below gives information about household car ownership in Britian from 1971 to 2003
The graph illustrates the proportion of domestic establish car possession in United Kingdom over a period of 33 years starting from 1971.
It can be clearly seen that while the proportion of one car and two or more car experienced development over the period, the opposite was true for no car. Also, the figure for two or more car went through the biggest change over the period shown.
In 1917, the proportion of two or more car was lowest with approximately 12 percent in comparison with roughly 37 percent of one car and over 50 percent of no car. over the following 12 years, while the percentage of no car decline dramatically from over 50 percent to 35 percent, that figure for one car went through a significant growth fell by approximately 23 percent. Meanwhile, there was a fluctuation in the percentage of two or more car around 10 percent.
The period 1983-2003 witnessed a substantial fall in the proportion of one car about 17 percent, which was followed by a fluctuation around 40 percent. over the period a sharply development was seen in the proportion of two or more car from roughly 10 percent to over 50 percent. By contrast, the proportion of no car reduce gradually from 35 percent to 15 percent and hit the lowest point over a period of 33 years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8210636292 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417777777778 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2532327032 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132557320452 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785762575474 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024450573424 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102105994999 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149086162555 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.