The process in which leather merchandise are made is fully describe in the figure. First, after taken off from the animals’ skin, the hide is hung up until dried. The thoroughly dried hide is carried to the factory, where it is undertaken into refining material for producing leather goods. In the factory, principally the hide is wash with liquid consisted of water and lime; afterward it is dipped in a tank with lime. After the first soak, a special mechanic facility do the flattening wet hide for further submerging. The flattened hide is once again submerged in a reservoir with a subtance called tannin which include water and vegetable matter. Following the second soak, the hide is procedured to polishment to conduct leather. Next, the refined material is transported to workshops, tailorings to finalize into leather merchandises we purchase and use daily as shoes, handbags, sport equipments, etcera.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'described'.
Suggestion: described
...h leather merchandise are made is fully describe in the figure. First, after taken off f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2027027027 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.825940311 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7072874087 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0424004371599 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0207869093012 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226702670379 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424004371599 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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