The diagram below shows changes to one university campus.

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The diagram below shows changes to one university campus.

The given maps illustrate the transformations which one university campus experienced over a period of 33 years from 1985 to the present time (2018).

In 1985, the university grounds had various sites. To the northwest, was a library. Car park, physics and biology blocks were situated in the north east, and to the south east was an admin building. Also, another car park was located in south west.

Remarkable changes has accrued today. Firstly, a number of buildings are repurposed. While the south-western car park has become a bust terminal, albeit in smaller size, the other car park has been replaced with a circular-shaped lecture theatre . Moreover, the library has enlarged to the south, converting to a library and IT centre. Secondly, some sites are completely demolished. As illustrated, physics and chemistry blocks have been overhauled in order to make room for a spacious science laboratory and the biology block has been demolished as well. Lastly, instead of the road, now different areas are connected to each other through newly added footpaths which have resulted in reducing the size of some building, such as the admin building.

Overall, the university campus has gone through significant alternation and has become an increasingly more practical place.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29411764706 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89994153667 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.7928332018 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0769230769 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103212614058 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360594869542 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561450429605 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816689078839 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592547059621 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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