The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its lifecycle.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its lifecycle.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Adler on Wed, 03/20/2019 - 12:41

The diagram explains how environmental issues by the ways it produces in the life cycle.
Overall, the process consists of seven stages, beginning with planning and design, ending up with recycling.
First of all, planning or design materials for production. Then, materials and energy resources will be transported to factories and consumption. It might undergo a process in these industries to become the product. After that, it may be brought to the where of packaging and distribution.
In the next stage, stores can receive these products and sell them to consumers. Subsequently, consumers might use it in their business. Noteworthy, the stage using by customers is divided into three parts. First, these products can be disposed of. Another way is that buyers will give feedback to designers. Finally, customers can recycle these products and following this, these recycling will return to the second stage is the consumption of materials and energy resources.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, then, by the way, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40131578947 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87973835713 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651315789474 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3726482076 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4166666667 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0714776238069 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268593684525 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361600068291 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0512148741858 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473797043477 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.15 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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