the diagram below shows how the Australian bureau of meteorology collects up-to-the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
The figure denotes in what way the australian bureau of meteorology gathers the latest data so as to construct valid weather prediction.
Looking from the overall perspective ,as is illustrated by the figure,there are four various steps that beginning with where the weather data is obtained to the last step,which is broadcasting these data ,should be taken for gathering trustworthy as well as update weather condition information.
As can be seen from the graph,there are three disparate sources namely,satellite,radar and drifting buoy that weather information can be achieved through of them.Also,it is evident from the information supplied that in the next step the satellite photo,which is obtained by satellite,radar screen,which is directly came out radar,as well as synoptic chart,which is carrying direct data of drifting buoy,are analyzed as well as prognosticated in this part of the process.
It is apparent from the diagram that all these gathered data ,which is related to weather, prepares some weather predicting programs through a central computer system as the third part of the figure.Next and last stage of this process is ,all these data directly transmit on TV,radio or per-recorded announcement on telephones.
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...ell as synoptic chart,which is carrying direct data of drifting buoy,are analyze...
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....Next and last stage of this process is ,all these data directly transmit on TV,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, third, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61979166667 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3900089046 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619791666667 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.978402575 43.030603864 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 269.75 112.824112599 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 22.9334400587 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994381511356 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073390673576 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446878472482 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073390673576 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446878472482 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.2329268293 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 61.2550243902 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.06136585366 140% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.